|Teen Poetry #2|
since 2000-01-27Posts 271
it's meaning i will conceal;
insight i won't reveal.
let your imagination flow,
see the things you don't know!
"Any fool can make a rule, and any fool will mind it."
Henry David Thoreau
Don't look... you might see.
Don't listen... you might hear.
Don't think... you might learn.
Don't walk... you might stumble.
Don't run... you might fall.
Don't make a decision... you might be wrong.
Don't live...you might die.
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since 2000-02-02Posts 2797
I like this poem as it leaves so much to the imagination. To me it seems like it is saying to delve into yourself and discover a new you yet at the same time it is saying that the insight to your innerbeing is being concealed.
"Poetry is the language in which man explores his own amazement."
since 2000-01-25Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
This is a very good poem!! Like A.F. said, it really leaves so much to the imagination! I love that!
Love and hugs,
"Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is a rainbow of delight."
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