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poe_32
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since 2000-04-01
Posts 179
Winnipeg, MB, Canada

0 posted 2000-04-08 05:15 AM



I try to catch you as you fall
but you slip through
farther and farther you fall away from me

I can't bear to loose you
to handle loosing another loved one
you've hurt me in the past
but I still have love you

I've forgiven you
and don't want want to loose you
your flying away from me
so close to heaven

I want to cry for your pain
and I cry for the thoughts that soon I will loose you
every breath you take
I think will be the last

My stomach tells me it's your time
but I'm not ready
I can't take this all now

I loose too many people I care for
and your soon to be one of them
I feel my heart breaking already

Don't leave me with all this pain
I can't take it anymore
I want to die with you

Your walking out of my life
which I can't take
and I feel like I'm dying inside

I feel alone in all this misery
without a friend to hold me when I cry
I need someone to love me

I feel like my life is lost without you
take away all this pain
I cannot take it anymore
I want to take my life

I will miss you when your gone
and I'll try to survive without you
but I cannot do it without help
I need someone to comfort me

Without a friend who cares
I feel like I will soon join you
wait for me
I will come

© Copyright 2000 Jessica Bjarnason - All Rights Reserved
**Angel**
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since 2000-03-31
Posts 162

1 posted 2000-04-08 01:15 PM


Wonderful poem here. I hope you begin to feel a little better soon.

Lindsay

ESP
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
2 posted 2000-04-09 09:39 AM


This is a beautiful poem, as is the rest of your poetry. Very sad though. I hope you find happiness and write about it and share it soon!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


poe_32
Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 179
Winnipeg, MB, Canada
3 posted 2000-04-10 12:42 PM


I will write a happiness poem very soon just for you Lizzie because you read all my poetry and reply to all of it as well. I'm glad you think my poetry is beutiful that really made me smile when you told me that, thank you!!!!
smiles and hugs to everyone!!!!   Poe  

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