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since 1999-07-28
Posts 46
New York, N.Y. USA

0 posted 2000-04-07 11:45 PM

The teardrops fall gently
down my face.
They fall onto the pillow.
My tears are like gasoline
and my heartache ignites the fire.
The fire which i have just released,
hidden deeply in the depths of my soul.
My stomache hurts,
i haven't eaten for days.
I feel needles piercing through my heart.
It's killing me not being with you.
You are so discouraging.
And you disbeliefs cut through my hopes
like a knife through butter.
You've wiped away all of my dreams
of you and I with your negativity.
You've spat on all of my ambition.
you've stepped on my heart with hate.
I sit, with eyes wide shut,
trying to remove the portrait of loneliness,
that's been so harshly painted by you.
Your artwork you've put so much time into,
my heart, which you have quickly crushed.
But it's not a picture, it's reality.

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since 1999-08-25
Posts 176
1 posted 2000-04-08 01:04 AM

Awww. I think everyone here can relate to a broken heart. But believe me things will get better. You may feel terrible now but things will start looking up. I wish you luck.


Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522
Missouri, USA
2 posted 2000-04-08 03:27 AM

ah, yes, I know how that all goes. Well, I hope that it gets better for you.

 "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \
I am lost in my own mind.

Some say the world will end in fire,
Some say in ice
From what I've tasted of desire,
I hold with those who favor fire.
But if it had to perish twice,
I think I know enough of hate
To say that for destruction ice
Is also great,
And would suffice.
-Robert Frost

since 2000-03-31
Posts 162

3 posted 2000-04-08 01:22 PM

Oh, broken hearts! It hurts so much but eventually it will begin to heal. I hope it heals for you.

Wonderful poem


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since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
4 posted 2000-04-09 08:50 AM

So miserable is loss and a broken heart...but as terrible as things are now, that's how wonderful they might become! Blue skies around the corner....

Love and hugs,

 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is a rainbow of delight."

since 2000-04-02
Posts 56

5 posted 2000-04-09 04:02 PM

a broken heart, is the worst thing in the world, much worse than a sickness or even cancer, it can't be healed very quickly, but everybody finds someone in time so,
keep your chin up

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