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nicnac8 Junior Member
since 1999-07-28
Posts 46New York, N.Y. USA |
The teardrops fall gently down my face. They fall onto the pillow. My tears are like gasoline and my heartache ignites the fire. The fire which i have just released, hidden deeply in the depths of my soul. My stomache hurts, i haven't eaten for days. I feel needles piercing through my heart. It's killing me not being with you. You are so discouraging. And you disbeliefs cut through my hopes like a knife through butter. You've wiped away all of my dreams of you and I with your negativity. You've spat on all of my ambition. you've stepped on my heart with hate. I sit, with eyes wide shut, trying to remove the portrait of loneliness, that's been so harshly painted by you. Your artwork you've put so much time into, my heart, which you have quickly crushed. But it's not a picture, it's reality. MY HEART HAS BROKEN. |
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Isabelle Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 176Indiana |
Awww. I think everyone here can relate to a broken heart. But believe me things will get better. You may feel terrible now but things will start looking up. I wish you luck. Isa  |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
ah, yes, I know how that all goes. Well, I hope that it gets better for you. "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \ I am lost in my own mind. Some say the world will end in fire, Some say in ice From what I've tasted of desire, I hold with those who favor fire. But if it had to perish twice, I think I know enough of hate To say that for destruction ice Is also great, And would suffice. -Robert Frost |
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**Angel** Member
since 2000-03-31
Posts 162 |
Oh, broken hearts! It hurts so much but eventually it will begin to heal. I hope it heals for you. Wonderful poem Lindsay |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
So miserable is loss and a broken heart...but as terrible as things are now, that's how wonderful they might become! Blue skies around the corner.... Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is a rainbow of delight." |
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natalie Member
since 2000-04-02
Posts 56 |
a broken heart, is the worst thing in the world, much worse than a sickness or even cancer, it can't be healed very quickly, but everybody finds someone in time so, keep your chin up natalie... |
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