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The end doesnt justify the means
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The end doesnt justify the means |
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Lucius Cade Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 235Saskatchewan |
The end doesnt justify the means Peace keepers sent to foreign lands Helping not with outstretched hands But with killing machines The end doesnt justify the means Welfare to help the unemployed On which people live, for free...overjoyed Which my money supports, why was the harm not seen? The end doesnt justify the means The way this world is sometimes Never ending, increasing crimes To calm my nerves, I need caffiene The end doesnt justify the means Lucidity is the answer to all problems |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
Yep, this is so true. I love the subject matter, a first for this forum I believe. Very deep and insightful poem. Great job!! *peace* Meredith *There is no destination where we are Please take me somewhere far Far away from this world of mine* (by me) |
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heart_on_sleeve Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 55 |
Good topic to write about.This poem really has some inside on how we should make this world a better place.Awsome work. Heart_on_sleeve |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Ah, you definitely hit a chord with me, Lucius. This is exactly how I feel. Very well done.  *Krista Knutson* As soon as man does not take his existence for granted, but beholds it as something unfathomably mysterious, thought begins. ~*Albert Schweitzer*~ |
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4eva_at_heart Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 238 |
this is great! i share those thoughts alot! great subject and great poem keep up the great work Bec |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
This is a good topic to write about. I liked the nice flow that youhad going.......caffiene always calms the nerves my friend....  ~AF~ What doesn't kill you only makes you stronger |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Great poem! Very insightful of the worlds problems. Nice to see an original sort of topic in the forum! Keep posting! Love and hugs, ESP |
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Lucius Cade Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 235Saskatchewan |
Thanks guys for your support of my poetry. I didnt think there was a place like this on the net but here I am. I hope to stay here for as long as I live Lucidity is the answer to all problems |
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**Angel** Member
since 2000-03-31
Posts 162 |
Great poem, it is so true. Lindsay |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
Too true great poem |
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natalie Member
since 2000-04-02
Posts 56 |
yes, you're right, it is all true, I think about this problems too, and there's just no end to it, well done, natalie... |
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