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jytree
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0 posted 2000-04-07 10:06 AM


Here I lay,
On this day,

Think of the one above,
The Greatness of God and his Son,
The very same one that decended like a dove,

Yet who is this in the distance,
Who is this woman with such virtue and love,
I look and see a princess conected to the one Above.

She looks at me with thoes eyes of fire that burn through me
She see who I am and smiles,
At that moment my heart was free,

She left leaving me there
So unaware of what just happened,

So I stand there wishing she would come back
But the trick is now I must find her that is the fact.

With hope in my heart and love on my mind,
I go I leave,
Leaving my life behind to go to search for this woman of virtue I must be out of my mind.




 For when day turn to night I am still there
The fallen angel jytree

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jytree
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1 posted 2000-04-07 10:18 AM


I know that I said that I was going to leave well I can't I still have to much to share
with my writing see poems are my life they are the only thing in this world that makes me happy right now so as long as I write poems I will be happy sort-of.

 For when day turn to night I am still there
The fallen angel jytree

angel6917
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2 posted 2000-04-07 11:00 AM


Just keep on posting your poems if that's what makes you happy.  I read as many as I can, but as of late I haven't been able to post very often- I got kicked off the computers at school, so now I have to make time.  I love your poems, though, and I know what you mean by poetry making you happy- it's the same for me.
Love,
Kristi Lynn

Tara
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since 2000-02-21
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3 posted 2000-04-07 06:59 PM


This was another really good poem.  I don't want you to leave.  I really enjoy your poems.  I read almost all of them even though I don't reply to all of them.  I hope everything works out for you and i guess just remember that you can always write!!   Tara
Alwye
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In the space between moments
4 posted 2000-04-07 10:30 PM


Very beautiful work here, jytree.  Indeed keep posting, and we will keep reading!  

 *Krista Knutson*

As soon as man does not take his existence for granted, but beholds it as something unfathomably mysterious, thought begins.
~*Albert Schweitzer*~

Isabelle
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since 1999-08-25
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5 posted 2000-04-08 12:46 PM


Awesome job and well written. You sound like a real romantic. I'm glad to see that you are not leaving. I do hope to read more from you.

Isa  

tracie66
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6 posted 2000-04-08 10:38 AM


A very touching poem, enjoyed this greatly.
by the way don't leave somehow I think you'll be greatly missed.
Tracie~


 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks


**Angel**
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7 posted 2000-04-08 01:13 PM


An excellent poem. Keep them coming!

Lindsay

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