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poe_32
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0 posted 2000-04-07 01:02 AM



Loosing you is hurting me so
I cannot live without you
I need you to stay with me love

Our love was so strong
I thought it could never end
it was everything to me

Nothing else made me smile more than when you loved me
I feel like my life was taken away
like you killed me inside

What will I do
without you
I cannot survive
without your love

You saved my life one time
by coming into my life
save it again
come back to me

Why can't you love me again
be by my side again
make me feel special again

I'm so in love with you
a love that will never leave
a love so strong

But you've left me alone
and I need you now
more than ever before

I cry thinking of you
every little thing that you'd do
and everything we'd do

I cry for our love
I cry for your love
I cry because I still love you
but why can't you love me?

© Copyright 2000 Jessica Bjarnason - All Rights Reserved
ESP
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since 2000-01-25
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Floating gently on a cloud....
1 posted 2000-04-07 01:01 PM


Oh what misery is there in lost love...this is a beautiful and very sad poem. I hope you find someone to share your love with, cos you deserve that and so much more.

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


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