|Teen Poetry #2|
since 2000-02-14Posts 183
Dreamy unapprochable mountians overwhelmed your desire
Deadly heights reign in your love
Moths dance to fragrant silky romances in the night
You gracefully fly in toment of the oozing love
I'm in heaven taking the halo of pain
Moving toward you
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since 2000-03-09Posts 522
hey, love this poem. one thing tho, I'm not sure if "oozing" is such a good word to use, other than that it is very beautiful and touching.
"Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \
I am lost in my own mind.
Some say the world will end in fire,
Some say in ice
From what I've tasted of desire,
I hold with those who favor fire.
But if it had to perish twice,
I think I know enough of hate
To say that for destruction ice
Is also great,
And would suffice.
since 2000-01-25Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
This is a really nice little poem, Nikkisweet.
Love and hugs,
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