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Nikkisweet Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 183Tx, Dallas |
Dreamy unapprochable mountians overwhelmed your desire Deadly heights reign in your love Moths dance to fragrant silky romances in the night You gracefully fly in toment of the oozing love I'm in heaven taking the halo of pain Moving toward you You smile... |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
hey, love this poem. one thing tho, I'm not sure if "oozing" is such a good word to use, other than that it is very beautiful and touching. "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \ I am lost in my own mind. Some say the world will end in fire, Some say in ice From what I've tasted of desire, I hold with those who favor fire. But if it had to perish twice, I think I know enough of hate To say that for destruction ice Is also great, And would suffice. -Robert Frost |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
This is a really nice little poem, Nikkisweet. Love and hugs, Lizzie  |
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