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To a lost love
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To a lost love |
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Selah New Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 8 |
I talk to myself, believing I can live without you. I live on the lies believing that love would stay. I beg and I plead before you, but you don't hear me. He may change your world And someday he may break your heart. You deserve no better. If you love him I will step aside. I offer this to you, So leave me as I love you still. And if he don't keep your warm You know I will. Once we were one, now we are none. I have to accept that. I don't have the power to correct such wrongs. He became your hero somehow, I became your clown. You deserve no better But my love is here. I offer this to you So leave me as I love you still. And if he don't take your heart You know I will. It's not very wise, not smart, You say there's no doubt about it If you decide you've got somebody else. I won't look, I don't care I can't say anymore about it, But my love will go on as long as the river flows. He will be your king someday. He may let your down. You deserve no better. My love is real And I offer it to you. So leave me as I love you still. And if he don't keep you warm, You know I will "There are two ways to live your life. One is as though nothing is a miracle. The other is as though everything is a miracle." |
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Ashiraladoni Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 52Duluth, MN, USA |
You're a terrific writer, Selah, you're poems are heartfelt and strike the reader in the depths of their souls..and you've touched mine. I'm sorry about you're lost love...she's missing out on something good. ~Ashiraladoni I'm in love, but he doesn't know it yet. |
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**Angel** Member
since 2000-03-31
Posts 162 |
What an excellent poem. You express your feelings so well and clearly. You have a real talent. Thank you Lindsay |
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dazed Member
since 2000-03-13
Posts 119USA |
Sad poem , You must really love this person to be there no matter what Dana |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
~This was filled with such passion~ Your heart must be aching and I send a HUG Tracie Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
This is a beautiful, heartfelt poem...your loved one is missing out big time! Sorry you are in so much pain....things will work out for the best in the end. Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is a rainbow of delight." |
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4eva_at_heart Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 238 |
Selah..you have such a wonderful talent! this poem is so gorgeous in the aspect that it is so real, heart wrenching and it comes from your heart. i was seriously near in tears...coz to be devoted to someone can be a blessing but being devoted can cause heartache and despair. wonderful poem once again Bec  |
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Tara Member
since 2000-02-21
Posts 76Minnesota |
i'm seriously crying right now. this poem was so good. it's so wierd how someone else can write about something you are feeling. thanx for your heart wrenching work of art. Tara |
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