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since 2000-04-01
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0 posted 2000-04-04 08:42 PM

he's cute and funny
smart and sweet
this wonderful boy
is the nicest one you could ever meet

he dresses great
he's athletic and tall
the perfect guy
but not for me at all

you might ask why?
it makes us all wonder
even me
yet i know just the answer

this perfect guy
that i love very dearly
is also my best friend
a brother nearly

for my perfect guy
the attraction is none
though i care deeply for him
we just liek to have fun

so we keep it real
and we go out as freidns
because we stay this way
our friendship never ends

~for robby~

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since 2000-03-09
Posts 522
Missouri, USA
1 posted 2000-04-04 10:05 PM

ohhh, very sweet poem. You showed this to your friend right? If not, you probably should, so he knows how special he is to you. Anyway, very nice poem.

 "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." I am lost in my own mind.

since 2000-01-31
Posts 228

2 posted 2000-04-05 10:51 AM

This oculd be the poem I wrote about my friend denny. I posted it like a month ago, titled just friends. The sentiments the smae. Great poem!

-- Crystal

 "The worst of what people do to one another is deceive.
Because when you love someone you control their version
of reality. If you lie to them that's like making them
autistic so that what they believe is reality is in fact,
not their true situation at all."

It's not the angry words that break the heart, it's the silence.

Someone said that true love is like a ghost -- often spoke of but never seen.
I've seen both and yet in my darkest hours, tend to believe that neither exits.

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