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Ashiraladoni
Member

since 2000-03-08

Posts 52
Duluth, MN, USA

0 posted 2000-04-04 09:56 PM

I've been watching you from afar
and we've known each other for a long time
and I thought now was just the right time to
say that if you'd let me
I'll be your number one, your all, your
everything.

You don't know how many nights I've dreamed
about you and I, hold hands, walking across
the sandy beaches, and looking up at the stars
You don't know how many times, I've wished I
could be yours and that you would hold me in
your arms.

I'll be your number one, your all, your
everything
Just give me the chance, and I'll make
every wish come true.

I love you, but you don't even know it
I've dreamed about you and wished that
you could be there, holding, caressing,
and kissing me under the midnight sky

I'll be your number one, your all, your
everything..
just please give me the chance.

SweetAznAngel
Junior Member

since 2000-04-04

Posts 13
Boston, Mass. USA

1 posted 2000-04-04 10:38 PM

Now that is what i call a sweet poem. =) It's one of the sweetest poems i've read.. You did a really good job writing it. Now that is what I call talent. The words you chose were just right and it expressed true emotions. It reminds me of something I went through before.. but that's another story in itself. Anyways, good job!

*The best kind of friend is the kind you can sit on a porch, swing with, never say a word, and then walk away feeling like it was the best conversation you've ever had.*
[The essence of romanticism is the ability to wonder and to reflect. In searching the meaning of the known, the human spirit reaches for the unknown, in trying to understand the present it looks to the past and to the future.]

Crystalina123
Member

since 2000-01-31

Posts 228

2 posted 2000-04-05 10:54 AM

I relate. Beautiful poem!

Crystal

"The worst of what people do to one another is deceive.
Because when you love someone you control their version
of reality. If you lie to them that's like making them
autistic so that what they believe is reality is in fact,
not their true situation at all."

It's not the angry words that break the heart, it's the silence.

Someone said that true love is like a ghost -- often spoke of but never seen.
I've seen both and yet in my darkest hours, tend to believe that neither exits.

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