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Thomas Jono
Junior Member
since 2000-03-30
Posts 25


0 posted 2000-04-05 01:20 AM


My Friend Melany

She’s cool and funny,
She’s charming indeed.
She makes the world sunny,
With just one seed.

She can dance, she can sing,
She has an angel’s eternity wing.
She has style, she has taste,
She’d never put anything to waste.

Even though were from different worlds,
That still doesn’t matter.
We both talk and play a lot,
And that’s what makes her a good chatter.

She has a soul,
Along with a good heart.
She would never pull,
Any of her friends apart.



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poe_32
Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 179
Winnipeg, MB, Canada
1 posted 2000-04-05 01:34 AM


I've noticed you as well like to write poetry about close friends. I've written a few for my friends. You should cheak out my poem called My Angel, it was written for my best friend. Tell me what you think of it when you read it, it may be on other pages. But I really like you poetry, I can really relate to it. Keep on writing!!
Poe

Thomas Jono
Junior Member
since 2000-03-30
Posts 25

2 posted 2000-04-05 01:44 AM


yes, i do like to write a lot about close friends, and yes I will definately check out the poem you have asked me to check out, and it was really good, it explains a lot about the one you cared, thanks for your comment and i will write more.. again thank you..
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