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In A Dream |
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SweetAznAngel Junior Member
since 2000-04-04
Posts 13Boston, Mass. USA |
You're a dream come true A dream I cannot reach A barrier of distance is tugging at me, This strong embrace is holding me back I wish I could just steal a kiss Just to touch you Just to hug you For a moment in time You touched my heart You touched my soul For a moment, the world stopped For a moment the angels sang For a moment, the stars glittered In this dream.. I wish I'd never awaken, Because for a moment, you were part of me, And in this dream, at this moment, You still are |
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kayli Junior Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 27 |
wow thats so pretty you expressed that really cool i definatly fall short of the tallent you have! ~hope to read some more |
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SweetAznAngel Junior Member
since 2000-04-04
Posts 13Boston, Mass. USA |
Hi! Thanks for the sweet comments about my poem. I'm sure you can do better though.. if you've got some poetry up, let me know and i'll check it out! =) Oh and if you have time, check out my page: Http://Zap.to/AznAngel thanks! -Julie |
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Ashiraladoni Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 52Duluth, MN, USA |
Good job on writing the poem. I look forward to reading more of your work. Welcome to Passions. Ashiraladoni I'm in love, but he doesn't know it yet. |
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Crystalina123 Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 228 |
I like the poem! "The worst of what people do to one another is deceive. Because when you love someone you control their version of reality. If you lie to them that's like making them autistic so that what they believe is reality is in fact, not their true situation at all." It's not the angry words that break the heart, it's the silence. Someone said that true love is like a ghost -- often spoke of but never seen. I've seen both and yet in my darkest hours, tend to believe that neither exits. |
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Singer1981 Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 148Fredonia, NY USA |
You did a really nice job with this poem! Isn't it amazing to feel like that...even if only for a moment. Keep up the good work!!  ~Sarah |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
This is a lovely poem!! I'll be sure to visit your website! Welcome to the family of Passions! Love and hugs, Lizzie  |
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Falmeblade New Member
since 2000-04-03
Posts 7Boise, ID |
yes, shyness and lost hope can be a pain in the butt when you want to know someone really nice.<!signature--> <font face="Arial, Verdana" size="1" color="#000080"> </font> [This message has been edited by Falmeblade (edited 04-05-2000).] |
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dazed Member
since 2000-03-13
Posts 119USA |
Good poem!! Hope to see more from you!! |
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4eva_at_heart Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 238 |
this is sweet and i found it a comforting poem great first post, and i'm sure you'll impress us all! Welcome to Passions Bec "tears are the essence of our souls" |
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