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Junior Member
since 2000-04-04
Posts 13
Boston, Mass. USA

0 posted 2000-04-04 06:53 PM

You're a dream come true
A dream I cannot reach
A barrier of distance is tugging at me,
This strong embrace is holding me back
I wish I could just steal a kiss
Just to touch you
Just to hug you
For a moment in time
You touched my heart
You touched my soul
For a moment, the world stopped
For a moment the angels sang
For a moment, the stars glittered
In this dream..
I wish I'd never awaken,
Because for a moment, you were part of me,
And in this dream, at this moment,
You still are

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Junior Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 27

1 posted 2000-04-04 08:48 PM

wow thats so pretty

you expressed that really cool

i definatly fall short of the tallent you have!
~hope to read some more

Junior Member
since 2000-04-04
Posts 13
Boston, Mass. USA
2 posted 2000-04-04 10:23 PM

Thanks for the sweet comments about my poem. I'm sure you can do better though.. if you've got some poetry up, let me know and i'll check it out! =) Oh and if you have time, check out my page: Http://


since 2000-03-08
Posts 52
Duluth, MN, USA
3 posted 2000-04-05 08:19 AM

Good job on writing the poem. I look forward to reading more of your work. Welcome to Passions.


 I'm in love, but he
doesn't know it yet.

since 2000-01-31
Posts 228

4 posted 2000-04-05 10:28 AM

I like the poem!

 "The worst of what people do to one another is deceive.
Because when you love someone you control their version
of reality. If you lie to them that's like making them
autistic so that what they believe is reality is in fact,
not their true situation at all."

It's not the angry words that break the heart, it's the silence.

Someone said that true love is like a ghost -- often spoke of but never seen.
I've seen both and yet in my darkest hours, tend to believe that neither exits.

since 1999-12-02
Posts 148
Fredonia, NY USA
5 posted 2000-04-05 12:44 PM

You did a really nice job with this poem!  Isn't it amazing to feel like that...even if only for a moment.  Keep up the good work!!  

Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
6 posted 2000-04-05 01:44 PM

This is a lovely poem!! I'll be sure to visit your website! Welcome to the family of Passions!

Love and hugs,

New Member
since 2000-04-03
Posts 7
Boise, ID
7 posted 2000-04-05 04:49 PM

yes, shyness and lost hope can be a pain in the butt when you want to know someone really nice.<!signature-->

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since 2000-03-13
Posts 119
8 posted 2000-04-06 04:09 AM

Good poem!! Hope to see more from you!!

since 2000-02-12
Posts 238

9 posted 2000-04-06 09:19 AM

this is sweet and i found it a comforting poem

great first post, and i'm sure you'll impress us all!
Welcome to Passions


 "tears are the essence of our souls"

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