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hoppy Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 271 |
Bubbles Bubbles gliding down from heaven tonight Glistening in the pale moon light World's reflected in the orb In the orb how simple it must be A bubble cannot hold something of complexity Down they all fall plump and bright So brilliant they appear in my sight I'm trapped in the bubble, look and see Oceans of orbs shining up at me How soft they seem touching ground so rough I bend to touch the sphere of chrome But it popped and life is gone -Written by: Hoppy 2-1-00 "Any fool can make a rule, and any fool will mind it." Henry David Thoreau Don't look... you might see. Don't listen... you might hear. Don't think... you might learn. Don't walk... you might stumble. Don't run... you might fall. Don't make a decision... you might be wrong. Don't live...you might die. |
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dazed Member
since 2000-03-13
Posts 119USA |
Good Poem!! Dana |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
This was fantastic~ I liked it very much~ Tracie Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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4eva_at_heart Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 238 |
this is great! i love it! the whole bubble and orb thing is great! this is going on my wall!! keep up the fantastic work Bec  "tears are the essence of our souls" |
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