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JennyeMeshan
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since 2000-02-15
Posts 103
Cecil, Wisconsin USA

0 posted 2000-04-06 09:12 AM


It's cold outside,
and you're not here by my side,
it's gonna rain today,
my heart is so lonely,
and it's you that I want only,
more than words could say,
Oh I wanna hold you,
Keep me in your mind,
Don't let it fall behind,
what you're looking for,
and if you say good bye,
I can only think to cry,
But I can't wait to hear you say,
"Baby I love you,
Baby, I care,
I love to run my fingers in your beautiful hair."
And all I will do is sigh,
and thank god that you're mine.

~JeNnYeMeShAN~  

This is a poem about my new boyfriend Nate. He has been the best to me ever! We have so much in common! He has brightened up my life! I guess I could say I love to miss him, but I love to be close to him the most. This is the relationship that I have been looking so long for! Thankx everyone for your words of support when I was down about dating! Hugs and cookies to you all!  

 "If thou can wait then thou shall stay"
-Destiny's Child


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4eva_at_heart
Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 238

1 posted 2000-04-06 09:15 AM


hey Jennye...
great poem and i'm glad that everything has looked up for you
best of luck

Bec

 "tears are the essence of our souls"


ESP
Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
2 posted 2000-04-06 12:38 PM


Is this the same Nate that Kristi Lynn just broke up with??? Just curious.....
Anyway, this is a really nice little poem....glad you are happy again!  

Love and hugs,
Lizzie



 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is a rainbow of delight."

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