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foxy_16
Junior Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 31
Lake Lillian, MN, USA

0 posted 2000-04-04 01:44 AM



I want to tell you
What you mean to me
How my every thought
Revolves around you
How when I look into your eyes
I feel faint
Because I see my life in you.
I want to tell you
How perfect you are
That you are so beautiful
The way you move
Your expressive smile
How you know exactly what to say
To make me feel beautiful.
I want to tell you
How I want you
How I yearn for you
The way you tease me
The way you tease my body
How you touch me.
I want to tell you
How I can’t
Because even though my mind speaks
My voice won’t work
Maybe it’s that I’m shy
Maybe it’s that I’m scared
Maybe it’s that I’m unsure…..

I just wanted you to know.


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ESP
Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
1 posted 2000-04-04 08:03 AM


This is a lovely poem!! I really like it. You should share your feelings with the one you love if you think you can trust them. Stop torturing yourself!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


DragonFang
Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522
Missouri, USA
2 posted 2000-04-04 08:14 AM


oh hoy and hey, this is the first time that I've read one of your poems (I think, It's morning, don't ask me to think), and wow, this is a very lovely poem. Great work, I really like it.

 "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." I am lost in my own mind.


Falmeblade
New Member
since 2000-04-03
Posts 7
Boise, ID
3 posted 2000-04-04 12:19 PM


Wonderful....it's all too true in crushes or not to be loves, I know all to well...*sigh*

 

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