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poe_32 Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 179Winnipeg, MB, Canada |
Life is like and ageing rose beutiful in the beginning then shrivels up to nothing just another dead flower thrown away to be forgotten to be replaced by another Life is like a song different in it's own way with a beginning and a end Life, it's all around us we live it everyday we see it, we feel it Life, it's what we have so why do we waste it waste it while we think while we think of tomorrow or what we did yesterday What does the past have to do with the present? What does the future have to do with today? Live your life day to day think of whats now rather than later Live your life day to day so your life wont waste away while you think of the past, everyday |
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4eva_at_heart Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 238 |
i like you intepretation of life  well done!!keep up the great work!! Bec |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
I agree with the sentiments in this poem...carpe diem. Thank you for sharing these thoughts with Passions. Love and hugs, Lizzie  |
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poe_32 Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 179Winnipeg, MB, Canada |
Thanks guys for your comments, it's nice to actually have people understand what I mean in my poetry. |
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