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~A Rainbow Born~ (See, one of your faithful moderators is here!) |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments 
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Baby blues gently flit Regal purples softly prace Spicy pinks now flare As the silver moonbeams dance. Navy flows with silken grace And golden yellow flies Hues of aqua lightly flow As misty whites do rise. Peaches quietly feather As brightened rose does soar A brilliant rainbow born With tints and shades galore. A paintbrush lightly smeared With softly gleaming dew Strokes the pale horizon With gentle color renewed. <font face="Arial, Verdana" size="1" color="#000080"> *Krista Knutson* As soon as man does not take his existence for granted, but beholds it as something unfathomably mysterious, thought begins. ~*Albert Schweitzer*~</font> [This message has been edited by Alwye (edited 04-19-2000).] |
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Astraea Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 378California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now |
Beautifully done, Alwye, like always! I love rainbows. By the by, I'm back! Okay, I'm done.  ~Astraea [This message has been edited by Astraea (edited 04-03-2000).] |
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Dusk Treader
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since 1999-06-18
Posts 1187St. Paul, MN |
Cool poem, Krista! Cool little description of each color of the rainbow. Fun read Abrahm Simons "...Watching fate as it flows down the path we have chose" - Trent Reznor, "We're in this Together" |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Beautiful!! This poem was a true pleasure to read....all of your poems are!! Glad to see you back in here again!! Love and hugs, Lizzie  |
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Comfrey83 Junior Member
since 2000-04-02
Posts 36Winchester, Mass USA |
that was fantastic! the one thing that often goes amiss in this room is good poetic devices and good metaphors but you nailed it. really, fantastic job -Andy |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Thank all of you very much, I truly appreciate it! *Krista Knutson* As soon as man does not take his existence for granted, but beholds it as something unfathomably mysterious, thought begins. ~*Albert Schweitzer*~ |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
It be nothing, I enjoy reading ur poems. I enjoy everyones poems. *shrugs* "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." I am lost in my own mind. |
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Crystalina123 Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 228 |
I liked the poem, beautiful imagery. -Crystal "The worst of what people do to one another is deceive. Because when you love someone you control their version of reality. If you lie to them that's like making them autistic so that what they believe is reality is in fact, not their true situation at all." It's not the angry words that break the heart, it's the silence. Someone said that true love is like a ghost -- often spoke of but never seen. I've seen both and yet in my darkest hours, tend to believe that neither exits. |
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