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shaheen
Junior Member
since 2000-03-27
Posts 16
Denmark

0 posted 2000-04-02 08:42 PM


Hello Guys.
Whatz up?

I can't get the poem wind of change out of my mind...

so I thought we could make a new one together...
what do you think...anyway those who want to can send replies...I'll be very thankfull

Let's go...
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I'm riding the a wind
...a wind of change

I'm listening to a wind
...a wind of change

I'm dreaming a wind
... a wind of change

(should we take this vers too?)
I'm waiting on the moment
where the wind of change
will blow us together
...together forever

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write your comments...

your sincerly

Nighthawk -mumba-



 "Their is an island of opprtunities in middle of every difficulty!"

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Comfrey83
Junior Member
since 2000-04-02
Posts 36
Winchester, Mass USA
1 posted 2000-04-03 11:30 AM


surfing
a WAVE of change (jk)

i like wind, alot can go with it but i cant add anything at the moment!

ESP
Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
2 posted 2000-04-03 01:43 PM


Wind. Lemme see.

A breeze blew through my heart...
it came fresh with thoughts of you.
I thought I was in love but then
A wind of change told me it's time something new.

I can't think of anything else right now. When I do, I'll let you know!!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie



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