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natalie Member
since 2000-04-02
Posts 56 |
I fell for you, I fell very deep, You were just the guy I always saw in my dreams, In those dreams you loved me And I loved you, When I finally found The guy from my dreams, I fell for him, I fell very deep, But it wasn't like in my dreams, I loved you, But you didn't love me, I fell very hard |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Well done, welcome to Passions! This is all too often the truth. Keep up the great work! *Krista Knutson* As soon as man does not take his existence for granted, but beholds it as something unfathomably mysterious, thought begins. ~*Albert Schweitzer*~ |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
ah hoy, wow, great poem, short and sweet, ah, okay, not sweet, but to the point. Anywho, welcome to passions, enjoy the stay. "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." I am lost in my own mind. |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Ain't that just the way so so often?? Awww, what a pity your poem couldn't have had a happier ending! WELCOME TO THE PASSIONS FAMILY!!!!!! Love and hugs, Lizzie  |
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