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Betrayal |
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Jessica182 Junior Member
since 2000-03-20
Posts 15 |
Thought I'd been happy To find my hearts torn in two Since now I am through Through with you Maybe you and me Weren't meant to be You set me free My heart was set at overdrive My heart was deprived What you said really hurt me This love will never be You set me free Maybe I wasn't what you expected My heart wasn't protected I could have never expected |
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Comfrey83 Junior Member
since 2000-04-02
Posts 36Winchester, Mass USA |
alot of mixed emotions in this one. but it was interesting how the poem progressed, very few have left me truly curious about the next line will say and this was one. -Andy |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
This is a very good poem...full of feeling and you never know how it is gonna end. I enjoyed it alot! Keep writing! Love and hugs, Lizzie  |
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