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kayli
Junior Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 27


0 posted 2000-04-02 06:45 PM


I seem so happy
everything is going right
this may be true
but why do i cry at night?

some would say i have the perfect life
and except for one thing
they are quite right
and yet this lonely heart makes me cry at night

its not that the one i want
doesnt feel just the same
its all because the one i want
doesnt have a name

empty dreams
lonely days
seeing happy couples
hurts in so many ways

no waiting by the phone
wanting "him" to call
no poetry about "him"
no "him" at all

planning my day around him
imagining days spent by his side
and writing letters never to be sent
are things i long to hide

this loveless life must end soon
it just cant be right
to have no one to dream of
and to cry myself to sleep every night

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ESP
Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
1 posted 2000-04-03 07:55 AM


Honey, don't stress!! Your true love will come along. I am 17 and I haven't had a boyfriend...I'm not fazed. It'll happen. To both of us! Just be patient and in the mean time enjoy being single!!!If you wanna talk about it, email me at  janetmp@global.bw

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


Comfrey83
Junior Member
since 2000-04-02
Posts 36
Winchester, Mass USA
2 posted 2000-04-03 11:35 AM


i get in trouble with loving love that doesnt exist too. its wierd when the desire to love overwhelms all else. you wrote it really well
-Andy

DragonFang
Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522
Missouri, USA
3 posted 2000-04-03 12:22 PM


Hey, that is a really sad poem, nicely written but very sad. If you ever need to talk feel free to email me or raise me on icq.

 "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." I am lost in my own mind.


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