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natalie Member
since 2000-04-02
Posts 56 |
I'm depressed today 'cause I don't have a boyfriend I want one so bad 'cause everyone else has one Even the nerds in my class Have someone who loves them And that's why I'm crying tonight But there are children dying in Kosovo I hate the world because my friends seem to lost interest in me They leave me standing alone And they laugh together about the stupidest things And that's why I'm crying tonight But there are children dying in Kosovo I feel bored because I don't like to learn my Dutsch I hate my teacher really bad because she's so stupid And she enjoys every exercise we have to do home So she gives us extra homework But there are children dying in Kosovo There are children dying in Kosovo And in the rest of this f*cking world And we only think about ourselves There are children dying in Kosovo And we are the killers and that's why I want to cry all my life |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
Wow, pretty deep stuff here. It is true that people make minor problems into big ones, and forget about those who really have the right to complain. Good job, but you can still cry if your friends are mean, or your boyfriend breaks up with you. Cause that sucks too. Love, peace, and body-glitter, Meredith *There is no destination where we are Please take me somewhere far Far away from this world of mine* (by me) |
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kayli Junior Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 27 |
man i know, i am probably the worst person when ti comes to this, i never think about any thign else, well maybe my close friends, but other then that i dotn really care too much, btu like meredith (lyricfetish) said, its ok to cry over the dumb stuff too, and we allllllll do ~kayli |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
Hmmmm, very well writen and thought out poem. very deep and sentimental (if in a way). Keep writing. "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." I am lost in my own mind. |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Let yourself cry, Natalie. Emotion needs outlets...tears and poetry work well. This is a lovely poem. What you say is very true. You have an interesting perspective on life...but don't be too hard on yourself. As for not having a boyfriend, don't worry! You'll find love when the time is right...I don't got a boyfriend and I am 17-never had one. Don't let it get to you. Love isn't a fad, try not to see it as such. Oh yeah, don't forget, you got plenty of friends who would never laugh at you here in Passions. You can always count on us. Love and hugs, Lizzie  |
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