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since 2000-04-01
Posts 27

0 posted 2000-04-01 10:12 PM

once upon a time,
in a far away town,
sat us three girls at mcdonalds
just hangin' around

i began reading my horoscope to my two friends,
saying “i’m to meet the man of my dreams,
the one i’ll love till the end”
“well”, said another, “we’ll see if its true
the next guy who walks in,
is the one for you”

as i heard the door open,
i spun ‘round in my chair
and standing b4 me
a cute guy with brown hair

my friends began to giggle
for it was only a joke
‘till the guy sat beside us and drank from our coke
little did i realize they knew this hott boy
he was from our high school
and filled our hearts with joy

a whole year went by
and i could not forget
his sweet smile at mcdonalds
and the day that we’d met

then came the day that i’d meet him again
to talk about him hooking up
with my friend
but he made me so happy,
like no one b4
and i started to liek him,
every day more and more

though he could not remember
my voice or my face,
on the phoen we talked to me daily,
and he made my heart race

you see im not the type
to fall so hard for guys,
but this one just seemed special,
and  i realized
my horoscope, i might say
really came true in mcdonalds that day

© Copyright 2000 kayli - All Rights Reserved
New Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 9

1 posted 2000-04-02 03:40 AM

I am new,myself.
This poem is good.I really hope that things work out for you and your McDonalds guy!
I will be watching out for more of your stuff.
Keep writing,

Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
2 posted 2000-04-02 07:32 AM

Welcome to Passions! I hope that this guy deserves your love.

Love and hugs,

since 2000-04-02
Posts 56

3 posted 2000-04-02 02:50 PM

what a way to meet your dreamguy, I hope I will be this lucky one time, I really like your poem, it's very original

Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522
Missouri, USA
4 posted 2000-04-03 01:21 AM

Hey, great poem, this is, welcome to passions. Well, I'm sorry, but I'm too tired to say more, have to go to bed now, but really nice poem.

 "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." I am lost in my own mind.

Junior Member
since 2000-04-02
Posts 36
Winchester, Mass USA
5 posted 2000-04-03 10:32 AM

great, kinda started like "leader of the pack"
but its wierd sometimes how people fall like that when they're not the people to do that.

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