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since 2000-03-20
Posts 15

0 posted 2000-04-02 06:41 PM

I long for more of what I

think I can't have

I need you more and more

You're all I love for

My survival relies on your love

it's something I can't verbalize

I miss you

even though you were never really there

Do you even care?

This really isn't fair

Why must you deprive me of the only thing I really knew

Is this really the best for you?

I am in a bottomless pit

my love is something you'll never get

why do I want to be with you if I hate you

I am stuck to you like glue

I need to let go

What I feel isn't what I say

I wish it would just go away

But the feeling is here to say

for I found out I love you today

I can't sleep

throughout the night

I try to fight

it all through the night

I can't let you out of my sight

I just don't know what's right

I try with all my might

When you swallowed your pride you choked and died

you acted as if you were the one that was unsatisfied

as if you had tried

as if you had to decide

you LIED

as if all that matters is your side

you acted preoccupied

I don't feel justified

This time I decide

For you I'd lie

For you I'd cry

For you I'd die

For you are the perfect guy

I wanna fall in love so bad

for love is something I wish I only had

When touch is inferior

to what you feel interior

thats when you know you must go

I have to leave you,

We are definaly through,

I can't think of you,

I don't love you,

I trusted you


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since 2000-04-01
Posts 27

1 posted 2000-04-02 06:48 PM

ur poems are really good, i know JUST how you feel, i seem to think i will love the dude i like, btu then he turns out to be a jerk like the rest... or else just too old (my mcdonalds guy)


since 1999-12-02
Posts 443
2 posted 2000-04-02 09:56 PM

Your both looking for love to hard. Calm down and take your time. Love will find it's way to you. Trust me. I have had nothing but wonderful relationships with girls. Now, love has found it's way to me, and I'm sure it will for you. If either of you would like to further discuss this topic or are in need of some advice, please e-mail me.
since 2000-04-01
Posts 179
Winnipeg, MB, Canada
3 posted 2000-04-03 01:30 AM

Wow, these are really good. You really put a lot of depth and thought into each poem you wrote. Remember that if a guy doesn't deserve your time, he doesn't deserve your love. You'll eventually find the right guy, but love takes time, you just need to wait. Keep on writing.

Jess (poe_32)

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since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
4 posted 2000-04-03 07:45 AM

These are great!! I agree with Jer...let love come to you, then you will know it is meant to be.

Love and hugs,

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