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0 posted 2000-04-01 07:27 AM

For years she's kind, loving, honest and loyal.
Everything I'd ever want in a friend.
Then when you least expect it, she cuts you off leaving you blowing helplessly in the wind.
Sometimes I feel as though a support has been ripped violently away from me.
So alone, so powerless.
At the worst of times I think, I wonder, I am puzzled.
When will the flames consume our friendship or have they already?

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1 posted 2000-04-01 11:52 AM

This is a very nice poem! I hope your friendship isn't consumed by flames!

Love and hugs,

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2 posted 2000-04-01 02:15 PM

Hey girl, I could write a book summarizing my experience with a similar incident. My ex-best friend decided this year that I'm not cool enough for her cause I don't smoke weed and fool around with all the loser guys in her 'clan', who by the way couldn't get any decent girl to notice them if they tried. It's pretty crazy, but I know how hard it hurts, and all I can say is: if you can do anything to help your bud, then do so, but if she is the one who is dissing you, move on and hang with your other friends, the ones who will always love you. I hope everything works out for you, chick!   --->  

love, peace, and dental floss,

 *There is no destination where we are
Please take me somewhere far
Far away from this world of mine*
(by me)

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3 posted 2000-04-01 03:24 PM

Thank you ESP

And to Meredith..I totally agree with you!
I think I will have to move on, which is sad but it is the best choice.
Thank you so much for everything


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