Teen Poetry #2 |
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Don't want to miss a thing by Aerosmith |
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heart_on_sleeve Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 55 |
Our song Our song that fate brought us together with We danced We smiled We held We kissed We talked We loved each other the minute we gazed into each others sparkling eyes This fate has brought us-from our first dance It was 5 minutes before we would have our ride home you asked for this last dance "Yes" I replied We danced close for our hearts to touch I kept thinking this was all a dream but it was real I never wanted to go out of your arms I wanted to freeze time so it can be like this forever The song ended so suddenly and everyone cleared out from the dance floor but we stayed in each others arms, just to dance to the love that both of us had made. *~Heart~on~sleeve~* |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
This is a really sweet piece of poetry, you must be so in love! I especially liked the line "but we stayed in each others arms just to dance to the love that both of us had made" That is a beautiful expression. Keep posting, I loved this poem! Love and hugs, ESP ![]() |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
This is such a nice piece. It is good to see that you have foudn someone you can love so much. ~AF~ What doesn't kill you only makes you stronger |
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**Angel** Member
since 2000-03-31
Posts 162 |
Oh, that is such a beautiful poem. Just wonderful. Keep it up. Lindsay (**Angel**) |
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April Resi Member
since 1999-10-18
Posts 119Alabama |
Very sweet poem! I can't tell you how much I thought of times when I've done that myself! I am so happy that you are so in love! Love the last line especially!!! April |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
That's precious. I'm glad you've got such a great person who inspires you to write so beautifully. Very romantic, very sweet. ![]() Love and toilet paper, Meredith *There is no destination where we are Please take me somewhere far Far away from this world of mine* (by me) |
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