Teen Poetry #2 |
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Monster in Control... |
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The Jackal Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 426Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A |
your really on a roll says your monster in control your taking uncertain risks and at the sight of you we all just cant resist pudgy sense of urgency life is safer on the outer rim its only part of the could have been pretend your dying.. pretend your hiding with pictures in the sea washed ashore whispering nothing as a final plea |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
This is a really good piece Jackal. I loved the emotions displayed thorughout the piece. Great work. ~AF~ What doesn't kill you only makes you stronger |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
WOW!!!! Powerful poem, this! Thanks for sharing it with us. Love and hugs, Lizzie ![]() |
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**Angel** Member
since 2000-03-31
Posts 162 |
Great poem. I look forward to reading more of your work. Thank you Lindsay |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
Deep, dark, mysterious and boding. Four words I know well, and I'm trying to tell you I like this! It rocks! You've like, awakened my inner freak who makes me make a fool out of myself. (the punk) Anyway, great post, I love it. ![]() Trying to get gum off my shoe, Meredith *There is no destination where we are Please take me somewhere far Far away from this world of mine* (by me) |
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