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4eva_at_heart
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since 2000-02-12
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0 posted 2000-03-31 03:03 AM


my heart is bound in loyalty
my heart is bound with truth
my heart belongs to one
my heart is all for you

my soul is full of laughter
my soul is full of light
my soul is burning furiously
my soul you reach and touch

my mind is made of knowledge
my mind is made of dreams
my mind is so ambotious
my mind is what you know

my body is a mystery
my body is a door
my body is inaccesible
my body needs a key

you have my heart in your possession
you have my soul entwined with yours
you have my mind with thoughts of you
you have my body in you hands

to you i give my all

© Copyright 2000 Bec - All Rights Reserved
dazed
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since 2000-03-13
Posts 119
USA
1 posted 2000-03-31 03:15 AM


Good one Bec!!!
You must really love this guy!!
Dana

anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797
Limbo
2 posted 2000-03-31 03:20 AM


Bec this is really good and really sweet. We can all tell that there is only 15 days left now...lol  

Great work!

EJ

ESP
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
3 posted 2000-03-31 04:57 AM


This is wonderful!!! Thank you so much for sharing it with us. I loved reading it....if only I could express myself so well.
Keep posting!!!!

Love and hugs to ya!
ESP


Danny Holloway
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since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK
4 posted 2000-03-31 02:58 PM


Very nice indeed!  such expression, and I love the way you ended it.  This is poetry!
Nice work.

**Angel**
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since 2000-03-31
Posts 162

5 posted 2000-04-01 07:21 AM


Beautiful poem, such good expression.

Thank you

Lindsay

LyricFetish
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since 2000-01-13
Posts 528
North Carolina
6 posted 2000-04-01 02:46 PM


Very well-written, the repition works great, and your words flowed together so poetically. I commend you. Save this one for the refrigerator. <winks and flashes you a mysterious grin>

            
Sincerely, the girl w/ multiple personalities,
Meredith

[This message has been edited by LyricFetish (edited 04-01-2000).]

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