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4eva_at_heart Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 238 |
my heart is bound in loyalty my heart is bound with truth my heart belongs to one my heart is all for you my soul is full of laughter my soul is full of light my soul is burning furiously my soul you reach and touch my mind is made of knowledge my mind is made of dreams my mind is so ambotious my mind is what you know my body is a mystery my body is a door my body is inaccesible my body needs a key you have my heart in your possession you have my soul entwined with yours you have my mind with thoughts of you you have my body in you hands to you i give my all |
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dazed Member
since 2000-03-13
Posts 119USA |
Good one Bec!!! You must really love this guy!! Dana |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Bec this is really good and really sweet. We can all tell that there is only 15 days left now...lol  Great work! EJ |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
This is wonderful!!! Thank you so much for sharing it with us. I loved reading it....if only I could express myself so well. Keep posting!!!! Love and hugs to ya! ESP |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Very nice indeed! such expression, and I love the way you ended it. This is poetry! Nice work. |
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**Angel** Member
since 2000-03-31
Posts 162 |
Beautiful poem, such good expression. Thank you Lindsay |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
Very well-written, the repition works great, and your words flowed together so poetically. I commend you. Save this one for the refrigerator. <winks and flashes you a mysterious grin>      Sincerely, the girl w/ multiple personalities, Meredith [This message has been edited by LyricFetish (edited 04-01-2000).] |
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