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I don't need you
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I don't need you |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
I know that it is mean to say, But why wont he leave me alone? His breath is decaying, His prescense makes me vomit. I can't stand him to be around me, The blackness I endure is horrible. Pain takes over my heart, Clouds of violence overtake my mind. I just want to be left alone. Get away from me. Go and spread your disease elsewhere, I don't need you at all. What doesn't kill you only makes you stronger |
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dazed Member
since 2000-03-13
Posts 119USA |
Nice poem!! hahahah You sure think bad about him hehehe LOL 8o) Dana |
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bulletproof2312 Junior Member
since 2000-03-31
Posts 28Beaumont Tx, 77707 |
You have a wonderful way of convaying feeling, this is a good thing. Writing out your feelings is the best way to get through something, at least I think so...writing and music... *Peace* ---Skye |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Thanks for the replies everyone. [This message has been edited by anonymousfemale (edited 04-01-2000).] |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
This is a great expression of feeling....what did he do to make you feel this way?!? Love and hugs, Lizzie  |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
He did alot of things to make me hate him but by writting my poetry about him, I have let him go and closed that chapter of my life. ~AF~ What doesn't kill you only makes you stronger |
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**Angel** Member
since 2000-03-31
Posts 162 |
It is sometimes hard to close chapters in life. Just be yourself and be strong and I am sure it will be alright. Great poem. Thank you Lindsay |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
Dude, guys are gross, we should send this anonymously to every guy in the U.S. I can think of a certain parasite, who conned me with false charm, that really needs to get this from me. Could I, say, borrow this one from you? Josh, I mean, Jerk-from-hell-who-needs-to-disintegrate, could use a dose of reality. This poem rules, you are a genious. <throws rose petals upon your feet>  Staring vacantly into space, Meredith *There is no destination where we are Please take me somewhere far Far away from this world of mine* (by me) |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
Hey, nice bloody hand by the way!  *peace* Meredith |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
Hmmmm I was wondering where that body came from.... hehehe, nice poem, I kinda know how that feels. "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." I am lost in my own mind. |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Thankyou Angel and Meredith. Meredith you can use my poem for Josh. I don't mind at all. ~AF~ What doesn't kill you only makes you stronger |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Shhh Dragon, no one is meant to know about the body! It isn't a nice feeling is it?  ~AF~ What doesn't kill you only makes you stronger |
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