dont know what to do(please respond)

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dont know what to do(please respond)

chollagrl4
Member

since 1999-08-10

Posts 65
brick

0 posted 1999-10-30 01:10 PM

I dont know what to do,
why do I have to love you?
it hurts so much to love u,
when u always cause me pain.
i cry so much i almost go insane.
The things you say,
the things you do,
its like u hate me,
or your trying to.
You say u cant live without me,
but that is just a lie,
i dont know why u pretend to love me,
and then u make me cry.

Systematic Decay
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1301
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1 posted 1999-10-30 04:07 PM

cholla-

Honestly, if someone is merely pretending to care about you, he is not worth the pain or the time. find someone who can truly care about you.

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
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Marilyn
Member Elite

since 1999-09-26

Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada

2 posted 1999-10-31 01:25 AM

I am not sure what you are looking for here. If someone is playing you then you must not let him/her! Your choice whether you endure this or move on. Be happy to be without someone so very immature and selfish.

Are you looking for thoughts on the poems technical aspects?

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