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ANON
Junior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 30
NZ

0 posted 1999-10-28 02:22 AM

This is for you Melissa, I love You.

Alone I wondered the empty regions of my life,
she left me for dead,dark,alone
destined for lonelyness, I died slowly in my pain,
the light over taken in darkness,
pure blank nothingness, my heart died,
and so to, my light.

As heavens gates opened up,
my lovely spirit drew near it.
As I gazed below, I saw earth, beautiful, peaceful,
I was destined to some higher aurthority,
but on my journey,
I saw a heart stricken mortal,
she had suffered pain equal to mine,
she too, cried for her love to find her,
but her love was unfair,
just like me, her love did not care,
and so he vanished from her life,
and so to, her light.

She needed someone, and so did I,
for I , a lonely immortal,
needed to cleanse my tears, aswell, as those
which, that very mortal had cried.
I prayed to the lord,
''please stop this journey, for I would like to take care of her,
and replace her broken heart with mine'',
there was no answer, my journey was almost at an end, was my pleeful prayer too late?
Suddenly heaven and darkness disapeared,
and so to, that light.

I awoke, standing at her front door,
her eyes gazed through mine,
it was instant, it was magic,
she knew I would be her lover,
and I knew she would be mine.
From that day fourth, we both undertook a vow,
a vow, where we'd live through life together,
our hearts be one forever, our souls be one for life,
and may our love grow stronger,
and so to,

our light.

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I love you Melissa

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Systematic Decay
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

1 posted 1999-10-28 02:52 PM

Very heartwarming, ANON

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-

Star Fairy 2
Member

since 1999-09-06

Posts 260
cerritos, california, usa

2 posted 1999-10-28 09:30 PM

this was good
like realllly good
one of your best i might add
=)

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Don't Fall.. Rise in Love
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Olga
Member

since 1999-07-26

Posts 152
Brooklyn, NY, USA

3 posted 1999-10-28 09:46 PM

I truly loved this poem, keep iy up

ANON
Junior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 30
NZ

4 posted 1999-10-30 10:31 PM

thankyou ppl, me glad you like
ANON

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