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Teen Poetry #2

The Key To Remembrance

Alwye

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since 1999-06-16

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In the space between moments

0 posted 1999-10-27 09:03 PM

The orchids blaze a quiet fire,
Across softly faded memories.
Images of vibrant life do tire,
Hiding within the greying seas.

Pictures swept with artistic touch,
Painted by the youth of moments past.
Now emerald lands have faded much,
To the wind, wishes are cast.

Bitterness lost to forgotten sands,
The darkness absent with the light.
Blessed silence within angelic hands,
Peaceful blindness within our sight.

The embers of time have become ashes,
Scattered wildly and laid to rest.
We must wait until the tempest passes,
To actually find in us our best.

The key to remembrance is plain,
Although a lesson rarely learned.
Keep with you a part of the pain,
But still find the peace you yearn.

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*Krista Knutson*

I walk with the multitude, yet alone am I in their midst. -- Daniel L. Miller

Star Fairy 2
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since 1999-09-06

Posts 260
cerritos, california, usa

1 posted 1999-10-28 08:16 PM

WOW!!!... this was so completely wonderful its amazing... it flowed gracefully.. lotz of feeling.. choice selection of words... GREAT JoB!
keep up the good work

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Don't Fall.. Rise in Love
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Systematic Decay
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since 1999-09-15

Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

2 posted 1999-10-29 01:26 PM

Sorry I missed this at first... a very wonderful poem. I'm even bumping mine down to reply to this-

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-

Marilyn
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since 1999-09-26

Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada

3 posted 1999-10-31 01:36 AM

Nice work Alwye, as always. I am impressed with the talent I see here in Teen. i have read you in Open and would never have guessed your age. Keep up the great work.

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