|Teen Poetry #2|
since 2000-03-29Posts 8
Bad men creep.
In the darkness they do seek
To fight us all, to make us weak.
And their intentions
Mean our submissions;
A price too high, too deep.
In the night they do their will,
The hunt, the chase, the goal: the kill.
A shadow is the product of the light,
And where there is light,
There is also darkness.
Only pure light can pierce the darkness.
Pure light, Holy light--the light of truth alone
Has the strength to overcome the blackness
And destroy the evil.
Pray, then, for the light to be shed,
The truth to be known,
And the shadows of the night to desist.
Pure light casts no shadow.
The truth will attend to itself.
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since 2000-01-15Posts 2034
This is very good writing. The imagery just jumps out at you.
Welcome to passions. Your a writer for sure!
A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives.
since 2000-03-29Posts 55
Awsome description words in it!Some men can be creeps as you said in your poem.
since 1999-06-16Posts 3850
In the space between moments
Wow, very powerful imagery here. You definitely have talent! Keep it up!
As soon as man does not take his existence for granted, but beholds it as something unfathomably mysterious, thought begins.
since 2000-01-25Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
Brilliant poem!!! You have a wonderful talent. Keep posting those poems of yours.
Love and hugs,
since 2000-02-02Posts 2797
WOW! This is a fantastic piece. I will definately be looking forward to reading more of your pieces for sure.
What doesn't kill you only makes you stronger
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