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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
I've known that the world can hate, And that it can love, But this world in which we live, Can be such a fickle world, To decide one day that we shouldn't For one reason or another, Love the person we love, And we leave them for another. BTW, this has nothing to do with anything, the words just jumped into my head a minute ago and I had to share it. "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." I am lost in my own mind. |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
Sam~ I liked this poem. But, you know that those last 2 lines really hit home for me... Ouch! ~Kristi Lynn |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
Sorry about that Kristi, just random words out of a chaotic mind, they are they are. *big hug* Love ya, talk to ya laters, Samson C. "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." I am lost in my own mind. |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
Sam~ hey, don't worry about it. i guess it wasn't intentional, but it sorta hit home. i'll forgive you this time, but next time watch out.... *grins evilly* ~Kristi Lynn |
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heart_on_sleeve Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 55 |
You are so right about this world DragonFang. Awsome poem!  Heart_on_sleeve  |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Exellent insight here, DragonFang. I'm glad those words just spilled out of your head, because you've said a lot and said it well.  *Krista Knutson* As soon as man does not take his existence for granted, but beholds it as something unfathomably mysterious, thought begins. ~*Albert Schweitzer*~ |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
You are so right about this world. Great splurge of feelings. I love this poem! Love and hugs, Lizzie |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
This is a good poem. You are right about the world being fickle but the world can only become fickle because of those living in it and making it so... Sorry, now words are just spilling out of my head. ~AF~ |
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4eva_at_heart Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 238 |
this is such a true poem. and i agree with Kristi.....the last 2-3 lines just jump out and make me think! ouch like Kristi said! great post Bec |
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