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since 2000-03-29
Posts 18

0 posted 2000-03-29 05:50 PM

Always Be My Baby

I must admit it hurts
to see you so into her
you two seem so happy
being what we were
I should have been more open
and told you how I felt
when you gave me that little smile
and made my heart melt
I must admit I miss
all the small things you would do
the things that made me fall so deep
so deep in love with you
the way you always made me laugh
when I was having a bad day
or played with my fingers
in the cutest little way
I must admit I think
about the way things used to be
and how things have changed so much
between you and me
im sure well be together again
our feelings come and go
but you'll always be my baby
that I want you to always know

© Copyright 2000 Suzanne - All Rights Reserved
since 1999-11-13
Posts 251
1 posted 2000-03-29 05:58 PM


yeah, but anyway    very well written poem. i am sorry about your loss, i too know what its like to regret unsaid feelings to the one you liked (loved)

since 2000-03-29
Posts 55

2 posted 2000-03-30 12:32 PM

touching poem written.I felt the same way as you with my loss too.Life can be tough and I know this for sure. I Love your poem and dont worry there's always a pot of gold on the other side of the rainbow.
         heart on sleeve

Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
3 posted 2000-03-30 03:27 AM

Nice poem
I'm sure everyone has walked this path before, and it can be quite a tough path to tread.

 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks

since 2000-02-12
Posts 238

4 posted 2000-03-30 06:18 AM

this is so sweet. you must have had something special fo you to recll all the little things that were contributed.

cheer up, the sun is shining


Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
5 posted 2000-03-30 06:34 AM

Nice poem, I hope you find happiness with whoever you are with.
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850
In the space between moments
6 posted 2000-03-31 12:41 PM

Exellent work, welcome to Passions!  This has a nice rythmn and flow.  Keep up the great work!  

 *Krista Knutson*

As soon as man does not take his existence for granted, but beholds it as something unfathomably mysterious, thought begins.
~*Albert Schweitzer*~

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