Teen Poetry #2 |
Always and Forever |
Suzanne Junior Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 18Florida |
Always Be My Baby I must admit it hurts to see you so into her you two seem so happy being what we were I should have been more open and told you how I felt when you gave me that little smile and made my heart melt I must admit I miss all the small things you would do the things that made me fall so deep so deep in love with you the way you always made me laugh when I was having a bad day or played with my fingers in the cutest little way I must admit I think about the way things used to be and how things have changed so much between you and me im sure well be together again our feelings come and go but you'll always be my baby that I want you to always know |
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pharon Member
since 1999-11-13
Posts 251alabama |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS yeah, but anyway very well written poem. i am sorry about your loss, i too know what its like to regret unsaid feelings to the one you liked (loved) |
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heart_on_sleeve Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 55 |
touching poem written.I felt the same way as you with my loss too.Life can be tough and I know this for sure. I Love your poem and dont worry there's always a pot of gold on the other side of the rainbow. heart on sleeve |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Nice poem I'm sure everyone has walked this path before, and it can be quite a tough path to tread. HUGS Tracie Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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4eva_at_heart Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 238 |
this is so sweet. you must have had something special fo you to recll all the little things that were contributed. cheer up, the sun is shining Bec |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Nice poem, I hope you find happiness with whoever you are with. |
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Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Exellent work, welcome to Passions! This has a nice rythmn and flow. Keep up the great work! *Krista Knutson* As soon as man does not take his existence for granted, but beholds it as something unfathomably mysterious, thought begins. ~*Albert Schweitzer*~ |
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