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Olga
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since 1999-07-26
Posts 152
Brooklyn, NY, USA

0 posted 1999-10-28 09:34 PM


You say I’m immature,
You say I’m just a kid.
You say that I’m a little girl.
And there’s no where I could fit.

You lied to me ad said you care.
Now you’re saying “Let me be,
You don’t belong in here with me.”

You told me “I’m way too old for you.
What will people say?”
I told you, “age is just a number.”
But no matter what I’ll do,
You will always act this way.

© Copyright 1999 Olga - All Rights Reserved
Paul Hoekman
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since 1999-12-28
Posts 382
Harwinton Ct. U>S>A>
1 posted 2000-03-03 12:24 PM


Did I already read this one?
Or it sounds so close to another one
I believe you wrote.
anyhow, age with in reason
should'nt really matter
IF the Love is true.

tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
2 posted 2000-03-03 04:30 PM


Nice poem... tracie

 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks

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