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*Moving On*
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*Moving On* |
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Silent Silver Junior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 12AZ, USA |
Joel I'm sorry it had to be done Joel I'm sorry I wasn't the only one Joel my darling you didn't try to fix things Joel it's over I'm moving on So we said it's the end, cruel teenage love plagues another. Live, Love, Learn, Move On. Joel Goodbye. I'll love again. |
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Paul Hoekman Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 382Harwinton Ct. U>S>A> |
Well done! You seem very down to earth about the whole thing, good for you move on  |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Said simply, but holding a lot of emotion. Great work, I look forward to more! *Krista Knutson* "Every moment marked with apparitions of your soul...." ~*Sarah McLachlan- Do What You Have To Do*~ |
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sunshine17 Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 89Bonduel, WI USA |
You did a really good job on this poem. You expressed your emotions very good, keep up the good work. Gina |
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