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Teen Poetry #2

On MY Own

sunshine17
Member

since 2000-01-20

Posts 89
Bonduel, WI USA

0 posted 2000-03-02 11:08 AM

There's a path I must choose,
A path I must face alone.
You've decided to turn the other way,
And left me all alone.
I know I will fall,
And things will go bad,
But I am strong,
And I will make it on my own.

[This message has been edited by sunshine17 (edited 03-04-2000).]

Danny Holloway
Member Elite

since 2000-01-15

Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK

1 posted 2000-03-02 06:56 PM

I like your strength in this piece. That will carry you through all adversity.
Nice poem.

sunshine17
Member

since 2000-01-20

Posts 89
Bonduel, WI USA

2 posted 2000-03-03 04:12 PM

Thank you very much. I wrote this poem to express to my ex that even though I still care a lot that I will and am trying to move on and pick up the pieces and become the person that I once was. Again thank you that was really nice of you.

Gina

tracie66
Member Elite

since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

3 posted 2000-03-03 04:55 PM

Beautifl poem sunshine...check your e-mail for a more in depth response

tracie

Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks

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