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since 2000-03-16
Posts 3

0 posted 2000-03-16 08:51 PM

I want to lay wrapped in your arms
Wrapped in security
and comfort
I want to talk with you all night;
see your eyes sparkle,
and most of all,
your smile.
I want to kiss you with all the love
this world has ever known,
and then some.

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Junior Member
since 2000-03-15
Posts 20
The Dalles, Oregon, USA
1 posted 2000-03-16 08:56 PM

Great poem infact I feel the same about some one in my life hope to se more of your work and welcome to passions
Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528
North Carolina
2 posted 2000-03-16 10:26 PM

Hi, and welcome to the family! Your poem was really great, I can tell this person is special to you. You write very passionately. I hope to see more from you soon!  


 *There is no destination where we are
Please take me somewhere far
Far away from this world of mine*
(by me)

Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada
3 posted 2000-03-16 11:11 PM

Welcome to Passions. You wrote your feelings very well in this. I hope to see more of your work.  
Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522
Missouri, USA
4 posted 2000-03-16 11:52 PM

I wish I had someone who felt that way about me....

Anywho, nice poem and welcome to passions. Enjoy your stay.

 "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." I am lost in my own mind.

since 1999-12-02
Posts 148
Fredonia, NY USA
5 posted 2000-03-17 04:55 PM

That was a really sweet poem!  Welcome to passions...can't wait to read more.

Danny Holloway
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since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK
6 posted 2000-03-18 12:04 PM

Nice poem, welcome to Passions.

 A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives.

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