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LunarFlame
New Member
since 2000-03-12
Posts 9
Nova scotia, Canada

0 posted 2000-03-12 10:13 PM


Come with me
come to my land
of cotton candy clouds
and pixie stick sands

Soda pop lakes
and peppermint stars
with a cinnamon sun
that is watched from afar

The summers are warm
and it rains lemonade
in winter it snows ice cream
as the will seasons fade

So come with me
come to my land
of cotton candy clouds
and pixie stick sands

We'll dream sweet wishes
and make them come true
in a land of sweetness
made for me and u


© Copyright 2000 Rachel Leeman - All Rights Reserved
DragonFang
Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522
Missouri, USA
1 posted 2000-03-12 10:19 PM


ummm... You're making me hungry darn you. Heehee, very nice poem though, and a place I would love to visit   Take me there? heehee. But on a more serious note, this is a great, light hearted poem. Love it.

 "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." I am lost in my own mind.

Danny Holloway
Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK
2 posted 2000-03-13 06:16 PM


Very nice poem.  good rhyme and it has such flavor (pun intended).

Danny Holloway
Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK
3 posted 2000-03-18 11:59 AM


This has so many wonderful calories that I am sending it back to the top for more to feast on.

 A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives.

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