LIFE (finished product) a poem some of us made

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Teen Poetry #2

LIFE (finished product) a poem some of us made

dazed
Member

since 2000-03-13

Posts 119
USA

0 posted 2000-03-16 03:27 AM

Life is like a long road
with ups and downs around every turn  dazed
with lots to know and lots to learn

There's lots of love,
and so much hate,                     angel6917
from hells door to heavens gate..

Theres lots of open doors,
and shut ones too,                    Elilas
Like the way your heart feels after a lost love..

Life is a mountain, not easy conquered
An uphill battle all the way,         Ashiraladoni
but in the end the reward can be sweet..

Life is a journey
an adventure to find
how one perceives it                  Danny Holloway
comes from state of mind

There is joy and sorrow,
no promises for you and me,
but opportunity for all.              Danny Holloway
Set imagination free!

So carry on,
and find what you love                DragonFang
and love all you find.

You may find someone special,
someone always on your mind           JennyeMeshan
keep them close to your heart..

Anyway thats life from all of us      dazed
to you!!Enjoy it, and have fun in all you do!!

dazed
Member

since 2000-03-13

Posts 119
USA

1 posted 2000-03-16 03:31 AM

Sorry this dont look so good instead of hitting preveiw I hit submit sorry everyone!
Anyway how do you all think it turned out?
Dana

angel6917
Member

since 2000-01-14

Posts 478
WI

2 posted 2000-03-16 09:37 AM

OOPS!

[This message has been edited by angel6917 (edited 03-16-2000).]

angel6917
Member

since 2000-01-14

Posts 478
WI

3 posted 2000-03-16 09:37 AM

I personally think that this poem that all of us wrote looks pretty good.
Congrats to all of us who posted for it...
~Kristi Lynn

DragonFang
Senior Member

since 2000-03-09

Posts 522
Missouri, USA

4 posted 2000-03-16 09:54 AM

Hmmm... I think that it turned out just fine. Kristi, shame shame, double posting

j/k

"Sa souvraya niende missian ye." I am lost in my own mind.

angel6917
Member

since 2000-01-14

Posts 478
WI

5 posted 2000-03-16 10:09 AM

I didn't mean to do that double post...

I still think the poem is good, though.
~Kristi Lynn

Danny Holloway
Member Elite

since 2000-01-15

Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK

6 posted 2000-03-18 11:52 AM

I like it. Thanks for including some of my lines.

A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives.

dazed
Member

since 2000-03-13

Posts 119
USA

7 posted 2000-03-18 11:06 PM

Thanx so much all of you!!!
I think we did a good job also!!

"Peace" hehehe
Dana

angel6917
Member

since 2000-01-14

Posts 478
WI

8 posted 2000-03-20 04:06 PM

Dana~
Thank you for writing something that can involve all of us. I think it was a good idea. Why not start another one?
~Kristi Lynn

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.