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weathers dance |
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emptyness Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 95mobile,Ala,USA |
little elves fly through the shy joinong together in a magnificant dance falling through the air THEY ARE RAIN joining them come the faries spinning among the elves spreading their joy THEY ARE WIND then come the trolls throwing the elves and faries away destroying the dance THEY ARE THUNDER then come the ogers crushing the remaining dancers burning thir bodies THEY ARE LIGHTNING then came the dragon removing the ogers and trolls and gathering the remaining dancers HE IS THE STORM ITSELF "scribere iussit amor" love commanded me to write |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
Hmmmm... interesting view of weather. I like it, very nice. *likes being called a storm j/k*  "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." I am lost in my own mind. |
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pharon Member
since 1999-11-13
Posts 251alabama |
AWESOME!!! very well done i like your comparisons |
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4eva_at_heart Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 238 |
i like this heaps!!! the way in which you compared for example trolls and fairies to weather forms...i thought was fantastic keep up the good posts Bec |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
I like this a lot... I like the way you used the fairies and trolls and what not in this. It makes it more interesting, I think, anyways. ~Kristi Lynn |
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