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an untitled war peace (also detention, same day too)
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an untitled war peace (also detention, same day too) |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
The battle drums The sounds of war Screams of dieng men Archers loose Catapults fire The toll of war is dire. Short, but then I was being yaped at by Mr. Culter.  Anywho, I THINK that is the only war peace I have around here other than the one for my novel... (I have >70 poems and add two or three a day) |
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Astraea Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 378California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now |
Short and simple. And by now everyone knows that Astraea loves simply put poems [probably because she can't write short poems!] and this is a nice one. Good job. And I hope you continue writing poems. ~Astraea "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness." "Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things." |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
ah, thanks. So you like short poems do you.... Well, I wasn't going to post another one today, but I don't see why I shouldn't. It wont take too long to type, and can mean many different things. I'll post it in one second. "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." I am lost in my own mind. ;) |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
bump! "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." I am lost in my own mind. |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
Sam~ Short, to the point, sounds good. I wish I could write how many poems a day like you do, but I have major writer's block. I've had it for a while now. Inspire me, would ya?  Anyhoo, I like your poem- I must admit I'm surprised I didn't see this one before. Keep up the good work. Love ya, Kristi Lynn |
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