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Teen Poetry #2

Natalie M.

NaTaLy
Junior Member

since 1999-08-16

Posts 43
brooklyn,ny,usa

0 posted 2000-03-15 11:02 PM

When Natalie M. went to hang out
We people looked at her:
She was classy from sole to crown
Clean favored,and imperially slim,

And she was always quit hyper,
and human when she talked,
and yet she fluttered pulses when she said "good morning".

And she was rich--richer then a king,
and we all wished we were in her shoes.

but so we lived,
and went without a perfect body,
and cursed the mirror:
and Natalie M. went home one calm summer night,

and put a bullet through her head.

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dazed
Member

since 2000-03-13

Posts 119
USA

1 posted 2000-03-16 07:17 AM

Interesting peice of work...Very bazar ending!!
Dana

Danny Holloway
Member Elite

since 2000-01-15

Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK

2 posted 2000-03-16 11:31 AM

Interesting write and dark for sure.

angel6917
Member

since 2000-01-14

Posts 478
WI

3 posted 2000-03-16 04:01 PM

Such a depressing poem-
I'm sorry, but I've had problems with the suicide thing,
and it bothers me because of that.
I like your poem,
don't get me wrong...
I'd better shut up before my mouth runs off on me here...
Hope to see more from you.
~Kristi Lynn

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