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ezt Junior Member
since 2000-03-13
Posts 19 |
I´d do anything to turn back time so that I could make it work for you and I in any possible way I wanna be with you everyday when I´m reaching out to hold you you push me away it makes me all confused but I know just what to do Tell you does three magic words release all your hurts make your every wish come true I´d do anything for you |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Not sure those three words will always work magic if the person they are spoken to does share the same feelings. If someone is pushing you away, doesn't sound as though there is reciprocal feelings. Just some observations, if the situation is real. You have made a good effort with this poem. Welcome to Passions. |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Welcome to Passions.  I have to agree wityh Danny's observations. If you are being pushed away then maybe you need to take a closer look at the relationship. I hope to read more of your work. |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
I wish I could help you with your situation, because I've been there and I know how much it hurts. Sorry, but I don't know what to tell you that Marilyn and Danny didn't already say. I can say that I'll try my best to be there if you want me to be, and be a friend to you... Welcome to Passions, and I look forward to more from you in the future. ~Kristi Lynn |
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