Teen Poetry #2 |
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All These Tears |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
I have all these tears hiding behind my eyes, trying to force their way onto my face. Nothing has been better for me before, but yet a part of me wants to let tears flow. I've never been happier, never more in love, but yet there's something not quite right. I feel these tears burning, and though I try my best to keep them hidden, the dam holding them back breaks. I wish I knew what it is that's making me cry, but I wish it would stop, because I don't like all these tears. ~Kristi Lynn |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Sounds like your heart knows something that you head doesn't. Two opposing forces at work causing that tear surge, I suspect. "but yet, there's something not quite right". That something is probably unequal committment to the relationship. Just gazing into my foggy crystal ball here LOL. Hope it gets better. |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
*sniff* I know how you feel. Your eyes just seem to want to cry, And yet your mind dosn't know why. I have been so sad before, To me, crying was something to deplore. But it felt so good to let it out, To talk to a friend who was about. But as always, we are here for ya. ![]() "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." I am lost in my own mind. |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
Thank you both for your comments. DrangonFang~ cute little poem you added. E-mail me, huh? ~Kristi Lynn |
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dazed Member
since 2000-03-13
Posts 119USA |
Very sad but good work!! Maybe you just need to cry and then the urge will go away... Dana ![]() |
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4eva_at_heart Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 238 |
lately i have been crying non stop...but i am so happy....happier than i have ever been before. i think it is relief. relief that i have finally found a special someone, and to them i am special too ![]() perhaps Danny is right here...but on the other hand it could be because you are over happy and the feeling is unknown to you ![]() whatever you find it to be...good luck ![]() keep up the excellent poetry Bec |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
Dana and Bec~ Thank you both for replying. I think you both may be right about the whole crying thing. Being this happy is new to me, and it scares me, strange as it sounds. But I don't think it has anything to do with something bad in my new relationship. Everything in that department is all good. ~Kristi Lynn |
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