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angel6917
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since 2000-01-14
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0 posted 2000-03-15 01:56 PM


I have all these tears
hiding behind my eyes,
trying to force their
way onto my face.

Nothing has been better
for me before,
but yet a part of me
wants to let tears flow.

I've never been happier,
never more in love,
but yet there's something
not quite right.

I feel these tears burning,
and though I try my best
to keep them hidden,
the dam holding them back breaks.

I wish I knew
what it is that's making me cry,
but I wish it would stop,
because I don't like all these tears.

~Kristi Lynn


© Copyright 2000 Kristi Stanczak - All Rights Reserved
Danny Holloway
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since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK
1 posted 2000-03-15 02:34 PM


Sounds like your heart knows something that you head doesn't.  Two opposing forces at work causing that tear surge, I suspect.
"but yet, there's something not quite right".  That something is probably unequal committment to the relationship.
Just gazing into my foggy crystal ball here
LOL.
Hope it gets better.

DragonFang
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since 2000-03-09
Posts 522
Missouri, USA
2 posted 2000-03-15 03:06 PM


*sniff* I know how you feel.

Your eyes just seem to want to cry,
And yet your mind dosn't know why.
I have been so sad before,
To me, crying was something to deplore.
But it felt so good to let it out,
To talk to a friend who was about.

But as always, we are here for ya.  

 "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." I am lost in my own mind.


angel6917
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3 posted 2000-03-15 05:28 PM


Thank you both for your comments.
DrangonFang~
cute little poem you added.  E-mail me, huh?

~Kristi Lynn

dazed
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since 2000-03-13
Posts 119
USA
4 posted 2000-03-15 11:08 PM


Very sad but good work!!
Maybe you just need to cry and then the urge will go away...
Dana  

4eva_at_heart
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since 2000-02-12
Posts 238

5 posted 2000-03-16 04:22 AM


lately i have been crying non stop...but i am so happy....happier than i have ever been before. i think it is relief. relief that i have finally found a special someone, and to them i am special too
perhaps Danny is right here...but on the other hand it could be because you are over happy and the feeling is unknown to you
whatever you find it to be...good luck

keep up the excellent poetry

Bec

angel6917
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since 2000-01-14
Posts 478
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6 posted 2000-03-16 09:35 AM


Dana and Bec~
Thank you both for replying.
I think you both may be right about the whole crying thing.
Being this happy is new to me,
and it scares me,
strange as it sounds.
But I don't think it has anything to do with something bad in my new relationship.
Everything in that department is all good.
~Kristi Lynn

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