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Missing You
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Missing You |
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sunshine17 Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 89Bonduel, WI USA |
You left me in this cold, cruel world To face them all on my own You said I was brave and strong But I'm not that snice you've been gone I need to find comfort on your arms Yet this place you've left me in is filled With harms You promised you'd be here So where are you? I'm so lonely without you How will I go on? I need you to come back And stay with meforever But you've decided to sit and wait For me by heaven's gate Until we meet again, I will always love you And you will always be my friend. [This message has been edited by sunshine17 (edited 03-17-2000).] |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
"Missing You" seems to fit. Sad piece this is for sure. |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
Yeah, "missing you" would work, I was thinking that "When I Need You." would fit also. Very nice poem. |
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dazed Member
since 2000-03-13
Posts 119USA |
very sad...but good work Umm cant really think of a title for it.. I like the ones danny and dragon suggested though either would fit |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Gina Nice poem Missing you is a most fitting title, I have to agree  Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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sunshine17 Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 89Bonduel, WI USA |
Thank you for all of your replies I really mean it. It's like I said before I know look at the Aaron and me thing in a whole new light. Thanks again Gina |
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