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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
WHY? Why is it that today nothing is going right? Why is it that no one wants to hold me tight? Why does nobody seem to know I'm there? Why does not a soul seem to even care? Why does no one see how hard I cry? Why do I have to keep asking myself WHY? ~Kristi Lynn "Sometimes people care too much. I think it's called love." -Winnie the Pooh [This message has been edited by angel6917 (edited 03-17-2000).] |
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poetry_kills Senior Member
since 1999-12-04
Posts 549new orleans |
angel: this is heartfelt and expresses a sentiment that all of us deal with at one time or another... very good work  sincerely, jerome the boy with no brain A savage place! as holy and enchanted As e'er beneath a waning moon was haunted By woman wailing for her demon-lover! ~Coleridge |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
Thanks for your reply, jerome the boy with no brain. Sorry, I had to say that. You have some sort of brain to write such good poems, though. It's hard for me to compare. I just write what's in my heart at the time, and lately it's been kinda depressing. ~Kristi Lynn "Why does no one sees how hard I cry?" -Me |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
I'm happy to say that this poem is going to be published... ~Kristi Lynn |
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jytree Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 336omaha ark usa |
great poem I liked it alot good luck with publishing. The Phamtom Poet Michael Jay Vaughn |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Very nice. Congratulations on be published. |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
Thank you for your replies. I'm so happy that it was chosen to be published!! ~Kristi Lynn  |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
That is really nice kristi. It's cool that it is going to be published. "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." I am lost in my own mind. |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
Hey, thanks, sweetie! You have no idea how happy I am to be having some of my poetry published. ~Kristi Lynn |
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*Nene* Junior Member
since 2000-03-15
Posts 16 |
I really liked your poem because today was one of those days. |
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