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angel6917
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0 posted 2000-03-02 11:38 AM


When you said "I'm sorry-
please take me back,"
I knew what my answer would be.
I wanted that second chance more
than anyone will ever know.
A second chance to prove
that no matter what,
we can work things out.
No matter how different we are
there is still something
special that can't be broken.
This second chance means
the world to me.
It shows me that you still care,
and that something special is really there.

© Copyright 2000 Kristi Stanczak - All Rights Reserved
Danny Holloway
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1 posted 2000-03-02 11:49 AM


a second chance, for two to see
if the love they want is to be
to see beyond the infatuation
having much better communication
sharing feelings and mutual ideals
knowing for sure what each one feels

Good luck


[This message has been edited by Danny Holloway (edited 03-02-2000).]

angel6917
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2 posted 2000-03-02 01:10 PM


Thanks, Danny.  Cute little poem you have there, too.  I hope it works out this time...  You know, the little bits of advice you give me actually help out a lot.  Thank you again.

~Kristi Lynn

angel6917
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3 posted 2000-03-03 09:27 AM


*BUMP*    
angel6917
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4 posted 2000-03-16 11:40 AM


*BUMP*

DragonFang
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5 posted 2000-03-16 01:46 PM


Another very nice poem Kristi. When I get a chance I'll go back and find all the other poems that you've written.   Smile, we're watching  

 "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." I am lost in my own mind.


angel6917
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6 posted 2000-03-16 03:39 PM


DragonFang~
We're watching?
Do you have a mouse in your pocket or something?
Just wondering...

Kristi Lynn

DragonFang
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7 posted 2000-03-16 04:32 PM


nope, no mouse, it's a wocket.   Actualy, my birthday is the same as Dr. Suess.   Anywho, I only say that cause, well, I really don't know.  

 "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." I am lost in my own mind.


angel6917
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8 posted 2000-03-17 10:40 AM


A wocket?
Ummmmmmmm, yeah, okay...
You can be as strange as me,
and that's a scary thought.
Just imagine how much we
could scare some people.
~Kristi Lynn

DragonFang
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9 posted 2000-03-17 12:54 PM


Yup, a wocket, you know, Dr. Suess? A wocket in your pocket? Hehehe, scaring people can be fun. Actualy, I enjoy it   Maybe we should come together and write a poem. *shrugs*

 "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." I am lost in my own mind.


angel6917
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10 posted 2000-03-17 02:16 PM


Hey, sounds fun, Sam!
Just let me know when-
no, better yet, e-mail me.  
This could be fun....
Love ya,
Kristi Lynn
(I still don't know what a wocket is!   )

DragonFang
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11 posted 2000-03-17 03:53 PM


I don't either Kristi, it has been too long sense I've read that book.   Smile.

 "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." I am lost in my own mind.


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