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Teen Poetry #2

The heart of a warrior

jytree
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since 2000-01-26

Posts 336
omaha ark usa

0 posted 2000-03-15 08:57 AM

The heart of a warrior what does it mean.
When he gives up and fails the team.
A group of warriors all huddled together wondering what to do next.
The race has been slaughter over the years.
A noble breed destroyed by the sword.
How sad the were are few.
They hunt us because we protect not attack.
Atleast that is why they attack me.
The heart of this warrior is broken.
scared for all to see.
My body is a scarry sight,
Blood, tears, screams in the night, and torment are what I put up with to become a warrior supreme.
I fight and defend I will not stand here and get hit.
I will fight.

The Phamtom Poet
Michael Jay
Vaughn

jytree
Member

since 2000-01-26

Posts 336
omaha ark usa

1 posted 2000-03-15 08:59 AM

If you people out there don't like this new poem just tell me and I will make the next one better

The Phamtom Poet
Michael Jay
Vaughn

angel6917
Member

since 2000-01-14

Posts 478
WI

2 posted 2000-03-15 10:08 AM

Keep fighting for what you believe in,
it's what makes you the warrior you are.
I'll fight right beside you,
if you'd like...
I like this poem very much.

~Kristi Lynn

dazed
Member

since 2000-03-13

Posts 119
USA

3 posted 2000-03-15 10:56 PM

Honestly I think its a good poem but it could use a rewrite... I'll look for more of your work soon!!
Dana

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